Es mostren els missatges amb l'etiqueta de comentaris oral presentation. Mostrar tots els missatges
Es mostren els missatges amb l'etiqueta de comentaris oral presentation. Mostrar tots els missatges

dissabte, 21 de maig del 2011

Oral of the Royal Wedding



ORAL PRESENTATION CRYTICS:

PRESENTATION

- Did you use any resources?
Yes, I use a powerpoint presentation.

- Were the resources relevant and attractive?
I Think that yes, it was very interesting, and so attractive.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT

- Did you look at your audience most of the time?
Not always, but yes.

- Did you read from your notes?
No, I didn't. But only one time.

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?
Yes, a question.


STRUCTURE

- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?
Yes, I think so.

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?
(okay, now I'm going to talk, then..)


CONTENT

- Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?
Yes, I did. For example new vocabulary: "few, split up"..

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?
Yes, I did. In the internet more.

- was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original?
It wasn't very detailedm, but it was original.

LANGUAGE

- Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order)
Yes I did.

- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?
(synonyms, new words, expressions..)
yes, something.

- Did you use sentence linkers?
(and, but, then ,because..)

- Did you use fillers?
(well, you know, for example..)

- Did you know how to pronounce all your words?
Yes, I did.

- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?
With a teacher.

- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?
Not at all the time.

- Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
I spoke with a fluid speed and continuum but I did some breaks.

You are your teacher!
What mark did you get? I think that a 6 or 7.

dimarts, 1 de febrer del 2011

Oral of Lacoste

ORAL IN CLASS:



Hi everybody my name is Silvia, I'm 15 years old, and now I'm going to explain us something about lacoste.
Lacoste is a brand of clothes, but is a brand of other products too. For example: a brand of shoes, a brand of watches, a brand of sunglasses, etc. Is usually expensive, but the quality is very good. Lacoste was invented by René Lacoste in 1933.
I prepare one video where I explain the history and other carectarists of this product:




ORAL PRESENTATION CRYTICS:

PRESENTATION

- Did you use any resources?
Yes: a video with images and explications,and I didn't use the paper to help me.

- Were the resources relevant and attractive?
I Think that yes, the video (for me) was very interesting, and so attractive.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT

- Did you look at your audience most of the time?
Not always, but yes.

- Did you read from your notes?
No, I didn't.

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?
Not any relevant one.


STRUCTURE

- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?
Yes, I think so.

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?
(okay, now I'm going to talk, then..)


CONTENT

- Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?
Yes, I did. For example new vocabulary: "brand of"..

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?
Yes, I did. In the internet more.

- was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original?
It wasn't very detailedm, but it was original.

LANGUAGE

- Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order)
Yes I did.

- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?
(synonyms, new words, expressions..)
yes, something.

- Did you use sentence linkers?
(and, but, also, then ,because ,however..)

- Did you use fillers?
(well, you know, for example..)

- Did you know how to pronounce all your words?
Yes, I did.

- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?
With a teacher.

- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?
Not at all the time.

- Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
I spoke with a fluid speed and continuum but I did some breaks.

You are your teacher!
What mark did you get? I think that a 6 or 7.


MY CLASSMATES
-Adrià talks about the history of Coca cola. I think his pronunciation is good and he explain somethings that interested me.
-Sergi talks about the company Abercrombie & Fitch. I was very surprised that made people queue (cua) to enter the store.
-Miós and Blanca explain us the stroy of Starbucks!
-Pau talk about the mobile phone. He showed us how the technology evolves and there are many applications available.